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Best regards Edwin!

PDE

........... unfortunately there is no camera/lens or exif data attached to this image so I can only comment on what is presented.

To me, it appears that your point of focus is on her mouth/chin instead of her eye and this has left her eye and hair a little soft.

My thoughts that  you may have used a pop-up flash could account for the differing skin textures (and bright whites on the dress) and light spots on the nose and shoulder. It seems as though you are shooting down on her, which could contribute to the image getting more and more soft, from top to bottom.

Your model looks lovely, and I would have loved to see her other eye...... just my personal taste.

As I said upfront, I have no idea what equipment you used, or how you took the image....... so this presentation could be exactly what you wanted to achieve...... I've just mentioned my "tuppence worth" on what has been presented, and how I see it.

Regards 

Pierre, Thankyou for the critique.

Grayham, thanks for the time to view and evaluate my photo. This was taken with natural light using a Leica M9 and 50mm f/2 lens at f2. ISO 800 and shutter speed of 1/15.