vlad po... 1 Posted May 18, 2003 On my opinion this composition consists of two parts totally different in colors and density. Right 1/3 or, at least 1/4 not very informative and can be cropped off. Dark tones on the right overpowering left side. The rest of the image is a very beautiful landscape. Link to comment
roberto4 0 Posted May 18, 2003 Yes Vlad, can! but the dark tones are a fine contrast to the refelxion. without it, it would be "a house"thank's for your comment. Link to comment
richard blount 0 Posted May 18, 2003 Hi Robert, I love the houses and I can agree partially with Vlad, I see what you mean about changing the image totally, so a comprimise, if you have any pictures of swans, ducks or similar, the right side would benefit from placing one in the water. I know it's a personal thing, but it would make this a Great picture. (Keine Beleidigung, es haben gut, mein Freund bedeutet). - Richard Link to comment
roberto4 0 Posted May 18, 2003 thank your for the suggestions! acctually i have only ducks :-). but i visit this place monthly, and i make fotos with different light of this house. i have a lot of them. so the next time i'll be there, i'll try to make a picture just like you suggested. and an other thing: for me a critic i never a "Beleidigung"(affront) and even if so, i like to discuss ;-) Link to comment
photomd 0 Posted May 19, 2003 Hi Rob. I like the way you balanced the setting sun lighting in the left upper corner with the dark tone elsewhere - this is challenging (maybe not for you!). A blue sky would've made the photo more appealing. I prefer it framed! Overall - Very good. Best regards. Link to comment
whinterberger 0 Posted May 20, 2003 The composition would have benefitted greatly through placement of the tallest building at the right Golden Mean, that is between the second and third part of the frame, with just a little rockface on the right and the image opened up on the left.However, the colours are crisp and clear and it is a very attractive shot. Link to comment
drymanphoto 0 Posted May 20, 2003 It's a nice shot, but I think a wider angle would help, with not so much space given to the cliff, or the cliff being a little more exposed. But then of course, you will have the sky to worry about. :) Link to comment
roberto4 0 Posted May 20, 2003 thank you for suggestions. i'll try the different changes by my next shot of this house. i'll post it! Link to comment
j. kathy mccabe 0 Posted June 4, 2003 I could die a happy photographer. Since the topic is out there, I think that the dark section of the photograph is a nice balance with the bright colors on the building. If there were no detail in the dark section, I would say cropping would be best. However, since there is terrific detail, I like it just as it is. Great job! Link to comment
henrimanguy 0 Posted June 5, 2003 I find that the contrast between the the rocks and tree in the dark and the village in the sun works perfectly. No needs to have more details in the dark part. It seems like we were coming out a black and worrying forest and suddenly arrive in the light and the warmth of this pretty village. Link to comment
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