Last rays on California...

Please advise to improve...

Advise to improve? I'm not sure that's possible. This is a really great shot.

Very nice in every respect. Great composition and colors.

there is nothing i see to be improved in this photograph. it's beautiful. reminds me of a painting. great job, Nabil.

Nabil, it is a very lovely image, but there may be a couple of things that could improve the image.

 

First, a slower, more saturated film might give you a better original. I don't think most nature photographer's would choose Press 400 for this scene. Second, I doubt the polarizer did anything in this image, so take it off so the light passes through fewer pieces of glass.

 

The only compositional change I'd like is to have the sun going down in the water instead of over the land. A few weeks ago it was probably enough further south to get the shot I mean. Keep that in mind if you plan to go back next year or in the fall under similar conditions.

The only piece that might have been expendable is the upper sky. Since it's all pretty much the same tone and texture less headroom might have been necessary. Nice catch in any case.

Delightful sky, very ethereal.

Excellent!

Excellent photo. I like thr rest of your work