htarragon 8 Posted April 19, 2011 Nice looking model, good pose, lots of curves and angles. The problem is you have too much of several things.Overexposure of the surfaces facing the sun (or other light source) - blown out whites on colored surfacePerspective lines lead eyes away from model to logs on far wall. Crop from right to edge of grass to right of model and down from top to bottom of log above her head.Her green top and the grass throwing a green cast on her face. A complementary color to green top would heighten her green eyes.Hope this helps. Link to comment
htarragon 8 Posted April 19, 2011 Correction: Top should be a deeper green and she should be in na place where the grass is not reflected onto her skin as in other of your photos. The first two photos and the last one are the best because they are in soft light not direct sunlight. Link to comment
mar_a_rosa_fust__escud_ 0 Posted April 19, 2011 Very nice! Very springty! (Would u like her shoes on the same green than the tshirt?)Roseta Link to comment
shenandoah 0 Posted April 27, 2011 I love the shot very eye catching...The green shirt throws a bit of a green cast on her face though...Bravo' Link to comment
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