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the is a 10 plus, great job

WOW!...Gorgeous B&W!

This is truely amazing!

Foto con un grande carattere,complimenti !

Love this in B&W..

Bravo'

wonderful and strong bw, really well done

Just outstanding. Lovely light, choice of gray scale and texture is excellent. The editing needs an extra care and the processing is a bit dark IMHO, Nonetheless good composition.
All the best. Warm Regards.

Haris,

She is a pretty girl. I like the idea of this photo very much. The lighting is very good. That is a nice background to use.

You kind of lose her in the background, especially her hair. There is almost too much going on here -- very busy. Maybe if you lowered the contrast a bit it might help, although, I'm not too sure it will make much difference.

I do like her pose, but she is actually leaning back on her hands. This makes her shoulders hunch up. She should be leaning back for looks and balance only.

I think her lines would look better if her legs were more out front of her and somewhat extended so that you could see more of them. They look a bit chopped off. That would make your compositional balance better, too. Right now you would have to crop a bit off the left side to get good balance.

Be careful when you burn in the edges. It should be subtle. 

Nice shot,

Mark