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her hair is too dark in this shot... you cant make out what she is holding (a braid?)

This scene should normally evokes erotism, glamour... but it does reach its goal. Or maybe it wasn't your goal...and in this case, we don't cleary see the main theme of the photo.

there was no 'goal' for this shot. it was an on-the-fly(pun intended), candid shot.

 

to rate this shot a 2 is almost insulting, but we are all entitled to our own opinions, and i thank you for yours.

 

a "2"--hardly....

not a "6" b/c I think the angle of her face & her expression fails to really make her look amazing. I"m not really sure what she's doing, but I would've had her pose in a way that emphasized the way her pants are hanging on her. I agree w/ the comment's about the dark shadows as well. great background and lighting (maybe a little too orange w/ the skin tones).