traveljack 0 Posted May 8, 2001 This seemed to say 'serenity' -- does this compose for you?? Link to comment
michael2 0 Posted May 8, 2001 Jack, you will probably get this several times over if you get many comments but, the tree on the top right is distracting. Partially because its out of focus and partally because it covers a lot of area. If you can, do it again this time sans the tree. good luck Michael Link to comment
john rabkin 0 Posted May 8, 2001 The only two elements that detract from my viewing pleasure of this nice shot are the masts poking out of the bottom and the obvious vigenneting in the upper left corner. Link to comment
christian deichert 1 Posted May 8, 2001 Interesting how you ask in your request for critique whether this symbolizes serenity, then title it "Busy bay of blue." Which is it? Lose the trees, fix the vignetting, as above. Link to comment
think27 0 Posted May 9, 2001 Jack, agree with what is here. Tree out of focus in upper right detracrts from an otherwise great image!! Nice work. I'm noticing ... you have two images now with pointy items in the bottom of your frames. (in this case the masts) Just found that interesting.... Link to comment
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