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# 271 - crop 01



Exposure Date: 2010:09:16 14:39:45;
Make: Canon;
Model: Canon EOS 5D Mark II;
ExposureTime: 1/1000 s;
FNumber: f/8;
ISOSpeedRatings: 400;
ExposureProgram: Aperture priority;
ExposureBiasValue: 0;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 50 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows;


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Lars,

This is a well balanced black and white - is it a film original or digital?  I suspect the former. Your exposure is good, the tones are excellent, but I would like to suggest a different crop.  All of the action is taking place between the two people - they are obviously in a long conversation.  I suggest that you want to show something of their location but make them big enough (by cropping) to be the dominating figures in the image.  My suggestion for a crop is uploaded.

Jerry

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It's a very powerful and well balanced shot..! Tones, contrasts and next the attitude of your subjects are great..!! Phoe.., yes, those covers at the bottom. Cropping them is no option. While playing (forgive me) with the image: the person on the right is seeming to slip in that direction. So did just straighten the image and by that also the bottom got a fraction less disturbing. Together with the beautiful white framing, this might be an idea. Lars, because of it's strenght and your vision I hardly did dare the crop..! :)  

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Good job catching the right moment on this one. I normally go for a closer crop too, but for this one, I also like your original.

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