Tyler

I realize it is simple. I would like you to critique the lighting, and skin

tone. Thank you for looking.

The high viewpoint is very effective and the lighting and skin tones are excellent . Why is there a difference in tone in the hair ? It seems to show dark at the far side and blonder closer . Bill

the angle on the face is excellent. the eye direction and expression are good as well. i would have pushed the light source back even further to give more shadows on the face. see how the mastk face seems kind of "flat"... if you could have created a little bit more shadow on the side of the nose up to the underside of the brow it would have been just a tiny bit better. but overall its very good