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strong expression on her face, a very good portrait with quite perfect black and white tones. Maybe you could have shown what she´s wearing on her head. I´m curious about it. Regards, Burak

Hermoso retrato, maravillosos ojos. Un saludo Francisco.

Francisco,

She is a lovely looking girl. She has quite the penetrating eye contact with the camera (viewer). She appears to be concerned about something. You have focused well on her eyes. Her make-up is very well done. I love the specular highlights on her lips. The background is nicely out of focus and she is well separated from it.

The lighting is quite nice, but be careful of her catchlights. One catchlight per eye is preferred.

It would be good to add room onto the left (her right) side or or crop some off the right side.

You could increase your exposure a little.

You want to compositionally balance the left and right sides of the photograph. The compositional "rule" for this suggests that you position the tip of the subject's nose in the vertical center of the photograph. By positioning the tip of her nose in the vertical center of the photograph you not only have her facing into the picture, but you have good left and right compositional balance. This little rule almost always works well. At least it gives you a good starting point from which to subtly adjust your composition to make it visually balanced.

Nice shot,

Mark

Linda foto para una bella dama.  Saludos. Mari

Un buen trabajo, Franciso, con un gran resultado, al que contribuye en la proporción justa la belleza de la modelo. Enhorabuena.Un saludo.

Excelente encuadre y magnifica mirada captada, con una estupenda luz y b&n.

Un cordial saludo -Tolo.

Nice and interesting portrait!

The eyes, always the eyes in a portrait.  Beautiful.... Mike