volgar 0 Posted January 17, 2011 thanks for your time, critiques and comments re most welcome. Link to comment
olafdevries 0 Posted January 19, 2011 Tolga, I would call it: "Please eat our pigeons..!" About the shot itself, I do see where you were up to. A friendly scene with life and some color in it. The weather wasn't holiday-like, haha. Next, the biker is too much on the left and the seven.. horizontal layers aren't fine: grass, path, grass, path.. etc. Yes, the pigeons are giving dept, however the green or too much green isn't harmonious with the grey of the sea. Simple: "Tolga, you simply must have had a kind of an off day..!" ;) Olaf. Link to comment
volgar 0 Posted January 20, 2011 "Please eat our pigeons..!" :)i see you know well the turkish, the pigeon -as a kind of sandwich- is a well-known food in Izmir but not in other cities of Turkey:) This made me think that you have ever lived in Izmir for a while enough to learn local expressions... am i right?thanks for your valuable statements. yes, it s not holidays, this should be the reason why the photo is not very dynamic. i also agree about lines of grass & path. They damage the composition which isn't already perfect.kind regards/Tolga Link to comment
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