mark_lawrence2 0 Posted January 7, 2011 I like the shot. Great pose of the young women. Nicely composed.If it was me I would do the following.1. A definite candidate for giving more light to the face because it is a little underexposed.2. The significance of the jacket she is wearing should be made more apparent by lightening it and sharpening it more. I think the jacket supports the theme of the photo. Celestial. She is looking into the sky.3. I would name your photo to give it more meaning to the viewer.I hope this helps.Markl Link to comment
samschnieders 1 Posted January 8, 2011 I like the space you've given her on the left side of the frame. I respect Mark's suggestions, but I wouldn't change a thing.Sam Link to comment
william_staniforth 0 Posted January 8, 2011 A delightful shot ! Beautiful young Lady and excellent pose . Well taken . Bill Link to comment
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