b/w Threat

This is a very well composed shot.

 

The only things that bother me are the position of the girl's head and the light on her face. If you do it a agian, mover her closer to the edge of the bed, and lighten her face a little.

 

Otherwise very nice!

Any advice is welcome! What do you think of composition, lighting,

etc?

Yes, it is menacing a bit. The girl's head is sort of in a strange position, maybe bring it out into the light a bit more. Also, try darkening and brightening the image to make it look more (or less) scary. Good photo. -David, Shutterline.com

I like it. A tighter composition might make it a little bit better. I'm not sure how you might have accomplished that, but its something to think about. Overall,you nice job with this photo.

I like it - very cool idea. Creatively frightening!!!!!