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Cantone, this is really a beautiful shot, and I love everything about it... except I think it would have been much better had you moved your subject to the right far enough to keep the clipped sun out of the image.

Beautiful model and great pose. The wall and floor in front of the model are too bright. I tried to correct it for you and made some adjustments. Hope you like it. Congrats.

Ahhhh, much better Raymond!

Raymond's corrected version is just right.

You have a beautiful model but i think you didn't quite manage to take full advantage of that.

I suspect you wanted to highlight the beauty and the grace of your model (female body) by placing it in contrast with a harsh ellement or setting. You have partially succedeed to do so.

Also, be careful about unwanted elements like the overexposed grass or tweaks. I find them quite disturbing.

Remeber to take full advantage fo the space in your frame. In my opinion it would have been better to frame right above that curve opening in the wall, leaving out the useless space that fills the top of your image.

Otherwise, i find interesting the way the curve line of the wall continues with the line of the model's back.

Regards, Bogdan