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Exposure Date: 2010:01:01 15:39:34;
Make: Canon;
Model: Canon EOS-1D Mark II N;
ExposureTime: 1/640 s;
FNumber: f/2;
ISOSpeedRatings: 100;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 0;
MeteringMode: Partial;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 70 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows;


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The idea is clear but the embodiment is to be better. Her face is strained and point of shooting is very high. Her hand is rendered too big. The rings and the bracelet should have been taken off. Her legs (I suppose beautiful ones) are not rendered at all. 

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Love the shot (everyone should visit the tracks at least once :)).  Given the colour of her dress and the tracks I wonder if a more visually pleasing image could have been created with her in the middle of the track with you shooting from above.  The green is distracting from this angle as it overpowers the rust colour of the tracks and her salmon coloured dress. Fill flash would have taken the shadow off her face although the proposed idea makes that unnecessary.

Best,

D

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