Me

While it is interesting and the whole picture got my attention, I am thinking that I may like the picture to have less glare on the glasses as the eyes are such a focal point and quite pensive. I think I would play up his expression through the eyes. Especially as you have cropped it in such a way to really call attention to this. Cile

Impressive portrait and expression. Cropping and balance are also excellent. I would like to it in BW with a bit more contrasts.

Cile said what I wanted to say but first... Good portrait.