Joanne (3)

Any comments/critiques most appreciated. Thank you.

John,

 

Nice shot. Colors are attractive. Well done.

I like the pose and colors however feel that the models hair lacks definition and could benefit from a spot of back lighting to define its top and right edge. If only natural light was available then this is still quite a good capture.

Thanks Robert and James. yes this was an available light shot. Perhaps I should have lightened the hair a bit more. Best regards!

Very good utilization of natural light source. An attractive composition with wonderful color scheme. Best regards.

Everything on this picture pleases my eyes, model, pose, colors and environment! Real work of art! Bravo John!

PDE

Beautiful work John. Love the colours and composition. Well done.

Very Good (6) - I would clone out the bra cup - a small nit here. The fruits and peppers are a nice touch  and man - that dress is passionately red. I also like the small spot of light on her forehead - that just seems to put an extra sparkle in her features and gives a sense that natural lighting is a part of the formula. Best regards,

Thanks all for your comments and ratings. Much appreciated. Tony I agree about the bra cup comment which I noticed after having already uploaded the photo. Some time later I did clone it out, which I am  uploading now. Best regards to all of you!

red peppers, red apples and red dress...

nice  work, congratulations

I like the revised version which seems to have the red slightly desaturated and the bra cup removed. Keep up the good work.