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Arhus museum of Art, Denmark. I'm not totally sure if I like this one,

I find it somewhat unbalanced as a composition. I would have liked the

woman behind the curtain to be more on the left, and a bit lower...

but perhaps I get too caught in my taste for geometrical composition.

So... thank you for letting me know what you think of it!

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Complicated image...you already say what the problem is with your image,  and explain it although in some ways wrong...Why, should I add to this...It becomes a bit more meaningful when you crop out the lady holding "Manfrotto" tripod case (good tripods) with red curtain as back ground ....

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I understand your feelings on this image.  I tried a few things with it and decided that IMO it works better by cropping more off the left side.....perhaps even a bit more than I've done.  This will put the man's arms at the very edge of the frame, I realize.  But what it also does is place the 2 woman so that they're each about 1/3 of the way into the frame.  This works better for me from a balance perspective.  Hope this helps.  Overall, it's a great image.

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Thank you all, and, Christal, I would say your suggestion is quite good. I lately tend not to crop "freely", but to keep to some established format (4:3, 3:2, 1:1, or 16:9) as a sort of tiny exercise in self-discipline... but this looks like one case where I might make an exception. I like the statue's hand ending at the corner, and also your crop gets rid of good part of that out of focus chain that I find distracting.

 

Ciao & thanks

 

L.

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I like both versions but I prefer the your cause I like the chain that falls in the left side...A very good Work,complimenti e salutoni Luca....

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