Janice #2

I like the angle, and nice skin tones/texture, but I am a little bothered by the softness of the focus in the foreground. I think I would prefer a more uniform sharpness.

Actually I disagree and tend to think that helps make the shot. It would be a very ordinary portrait if the head were not cropped, but as it is, it focuses attention more on the lines and curves. I don't think of this as a 'portrait' per se.