Electric

Please tell me what you think of this photo. Also what could be done

to make it better. Thanks, Jim.

I'm new at this, but ... for what it's worth ... the leaning, off-center background is very distracting. Especially the strip of light on the right side of the photo. I also would not have centered the model in the frame. I like the model and the pose, and the lighting seems OK to my inexperienced eyes.

what is wrong with her?

The black portion of her dress is featureless...would like to see some texture/detail there. The busy pattern of the dress is a bit much for me...might work better if the wrinkles were not there.