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A sunset at the beach.

It seems to me that the photo would work better if you had underexposed it, or waited for the sun to go down a bit more. I find the huge expanse of white in the middle to be distracting.

I would have a custom print made and have the sky "burnt in" to provide more detail. Being this is probably a scan off a print, there is probably much more detail in the original negative in the sky then on the print, but the print needs some TLC to bring it out.

 

This is a very nice sunset shot and one of the better ones I've seen. The tonality in the water is fantastic, so I'd work with this picture to make it better.

The details in the sea are beautiful. As wel as the waves forming the motive and containing the subtle transition of the colors. The sky supports the dramatic effect of the image. Probably I woud have choosed the horizon higer or lower, to emphasis the beautyful colors and relief of the sea or to stress the dramatic sky painted by the sunset