dougityb 0 Posted September 7, 2010 any general criticisms or comments welcome. thanks in advance. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted September 7, 2010 Outstanding work, the model stand so well with its light against the critical background lighting, more over the background colors do adds the fine composition here, thank you for sharing this work and wishing you all of the best. Link to comment
MichaelChang 12 Posted September 7, 2010 Hi Doug, this picture has an unusual rendering; I was expecting to see warm tones along the lines of "Ocean Sunrise". It's Oddly pretty; maybe it's the slightly muted model, her nutural expression, the pale skin tone and white dress, giving the picture a slight eerie feel. Was that your intention?I can see from the shadows that there's a light source from her upper-right; I guess the white balance is giving her a slight blue cast (if my monitor isn't fooling me again). The only negative I see is her support strap showing, a pet peeve - girls just seem to keep tucking at it and never getting it right. Link to comment
dag 0 Posted September 7, 2010 Quite complex lighting scheme really well balanced. Matter of taste here...IMHO the key light on model is a little bit off... maybe 1/2 EV more light could be more interesting for me. Regards. Daniele Link to comment
dougityb 0 Posted October 4, 2010 thanks for the commentary. Michael, I believe I fixed that strap (photoshop) since posting this. It wasn't easy. the light on the right is actually behind her, in the water. The key light is just a bit to camera left. I agree, the light could be a little brighter on the figure. Link to comment
dougityb 0 Posted October 6, 2010 reposted and thrown into the ratings mill: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=11752643 Link to comment
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