In White 3

much better composed, the pose is also a bit more natural - but in this case, the tone is a bit blueish... You can correct it maybe with a software.

Hadn't check on you for quite a while, and now I see that all your pictures are gone, replaced by a few new ones... What was that for...?

Besides that, this picture here is imo the best of your portraits of her in this folder so far. The composition is just fine. My only regret being that the face could have looked a tad better with a strong reflector on it. The skin tones are also a bit too redish here. That's about all... Besides that, given the dramatic set up for this image, I would be tempted to go B&W or sepia for this, but that can be argued about...

Cheers.

A nice portrait. However, I think going to a vertical format and including her hands would have made for a stronger image.

This was not done on a one to one. She was an available model at a

photo seminar. Walking by, I stopped and clicked a few shots.

Outdoors available light. Comments?

It's my opinion that it would be a better iamge if don't cut off her hands and crop at perhaps her waist and not through the middle of her bra.

Ken - Nice Shot. I really like it. It is nicely composed and in my opinion the best of the few you have of her. Too bad you didn't have more time to work with her.

Exellent Portrait.

Hmmm this seems like a vertical shot to me.. not a horizontal. Face could be better lit... and looks a bit rough. Skin tone is off. I do like the pose and expression a lot.

I agree with Keith comment above. Anyway, very beautiful photo of a pretty model.

Very good shot Ken!!!!

I think of the four posted, this one captures the most emotion for me, although I wish you could have gotten her hands in the frame as well. Yes I know everyone's a critic.

I agree about the hands. She was part of an open shoot at a seminar and there were numerous people around making a good vantage point not always easy