Sisters ~ Boot Hill By Lee McLaughlin

Don't look especially haunted to me.

Lee,

A couple of comments that may (or not) improve the image...

I wouldn't crop into their hands.

Your image is left heavy. Crop some off the right side to make your image more left and right compositionally balanced.

The pointy, tiny little catch lights in the center of their pupils makes it look like you used the built-in flash of your camera. That gives you very flat lighting.

There isn't much detail in their black gowns. They look like they are either conjoined twins (Siamese twins) or they are about to participate in a three legged race and are sharing a dress.

Your name is not part of the photograph. It would be quite proper to place it on a mat surrounding your photograph.

They don't look very spooky to me, either. The one on the right does have a rather dingy (darkish gray/purple) face. That makes her look a little spooky, maybe. She may need a little more blood?

Nice shot,

Mark

i like the picture - its imperfect and funny - they could have popped out of a coffin in a Tim Burton flick! And yes they freak me out a little. But then I'm sixty years old and nubile sexy girls scare me!