Lilli

I like the model. I like the fresh from the water look. Superb expression on her face. She might be a bit over-exposed (in the camera/light meaning). I do not like the red wrap. It looks to much to me like red cellophane floating in the water--like she just got draped by some floating trash. If it is an important photo element I think it needs more definition, more color, something--its impact floats away in the water. If it is for modesty, I would prefer skimpy panties or loose, flowing boxer shorts, deeper water, or some very artful smudging. Another distracting element are the reflections or whatever in the water between her and the lower right corner of the image. Makes me think of jelly fish or oil floating on the water. Greenish water and a red-head works for me. Better than I'd have guessed.