If you don't like what you see here

Due to the only spot I could take this photograph from some vertical

and horizontal lines are not completely straight. Does that take away

from the image that in my opinion is very nice in tonality and

subject?

The convergenge of the verticals is no problem, the distraction of the drain pipe however is.

 

Yes, the tonality is very good. Notice that the bars have almost sky blue in them - the opposite color to the brick red. And then there is a good palette from ed to brown. The layout is also good. The only spot that disturbs is the lower right corner - it could be stamped away. Good!