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I think the positioning of her is not the best (just under the light and in the middle) , cheers Jana

No Jana, Is correct the position, look the black shadow on the floor and the ceiling .........the place you mean was more dark, with dark shadows on her face. cheers, and thank so much for your critique detail.-

Great model work, light and the atmosphere is superb, I wounder how it will look if the ceiling light been eleminated and lived with this sort of sourronding tone alone, outstanding image and my English is too poor.

Wishing you all of the best my friend.

I'll take a bit from all your comments....still Mauritzio I also think a strobe for fill flash could have improved the looks from the waist down....and not loose the dramatic look of the photo(a silver reflector would have done the job even with the light from the ceiling ). Since you went for harsh shadows at least on the face, from the middle down the tones are softer so you loose a bit of effect. This is something you can try next time. I also think the fluorescent bulbs there are adding to the photo mood so I  like them there... :)

My regards,

Andrei

Like the use of the location with the lighting and lines, good pose from your model and well lit too.

Dear Andrei, first of all thank you for your comment.

I tell you that I like take the light as I find.

Sure, a reflector could make a different light, but I don't like to go over the reality, I like the snapshoot. In the way to take the pictures as I find the location.

Surely, the reflector would gave more details on the legs, but here, important is the topless, and not the legs.-

Nice day Andrei.-

hey! glad to have a feedback from you. The critique was subjective...in the way that I would do it. The way that you see it makes perfect sense...and actually with no lighting setup it looks pretty good.

Keep shooting