Sarah

This images is from a recent fashion shoot. Looking for critical

feedback! Thank You!

Nathan,

I like the warm tonalities, but the pose is hard to buy as fashion because the garment and its lines do not show very well. She also has a kind of frightened look which would not be used to sell clothing or amost anything else other than underarm deoderant.   Since women (fashion buyers) always look at the entire outfit the shoes should not be cut off.  The sock cuts into the calf and makes it bulge, so that should be retouched and the spot on the floor between sock and chair leg should be removed.

Regards,

Jerry Matchett

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You cut off the model feet and this is distracting as she has good looking legs. Something is stick out of her head of the right side of the photo. It might be hair but it does not look good to me. I would have clone out the spot on the floor between her leg and chair. I would have move the model closer to the wall because the beam on the bottom of the wall goes through you photo. I would have remove the ring from her hand it big and this is another distraction. I would have smooth a little the model knee caps as they have small shadows. I would have clone out the loose hair on the left side of the photo. I would leave some hair but the loose hair below her eye on the outside I would have removed.