Portrait Revisited

Anything under a 4 tells me I have done something wrong. I tried a

vignette. I like this better than the original. Feedback please?

Thanks Bob.  I appreciate that.  I am trying hard to capture good clear deep images.  Learning everyday.  Thanks again..

A very nice portrait. I love the composition and the vignette and you have captured a nice expression on the model's face. It might be interesting to see how the image would change if the model's right leg were less bright, as it tends to draw the eye away from her face. Very nicely done however, and thanks for sharing it with us!

Mark

I appreciate your feedback so much.  I should have seen that myself.  I am learning and any feedback folks can give is taken and put to good use.  I have edited the picture a little by moving the vignette a tad.  I think it works.  I know that eyes will be drawn to her face now instead of her leg.  Thanks once again.  I appreciate it.