andrew_vonbank 0 Posted March 8, 2003 I like this composition because it has a spartan touch, accentuates the natural forms within rigid confines, and integrates the border with the pictorial subject. Nice work. Link to comment
ivan colman 0 Posted March 10, 2003 Very good concept ! The composition appeared OK for me. There is a clear diagonal build up. The harpness is OK and the lightning is good. Only the extreme tip of the upper leaf appear to be a little over-lightened. The red glass borders contrast with the green leaves. But I don't like the background color. My very personal opinion is that the purple do not fit that well with the green (and even with the red in this context) Link to comment
eugenio_srednyakov 0 Posted March 15, 2003 Artly! The idea - red edge of a glass has especially liked, an original way unostentatiously to bring lines in the picture. Link to comment
nickolay_lavrik 0 Posted March 16, 2003 Thank you all for the constructive comments and ratings. Ivan, I agree that the choice of the background color was not well thought out and that the bleached out tip of the left leaf is somewhat distracting. It looks like it's worth to reshoot this composition on a film camera. Link to comment
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