Alice

Critiques welcome. Thanks, Milan.

nice portrait, great light

Great detail and beautiful lighting. The hidden eyes add some mystery to this photo. Congrats.

Very good portrait, would just lil bit more brightness on her face, not too much, just a bit, in my screen i cant reach her face

Small comments, but with such a strong composition I feel they may be helpful.  The cheek and chin are a little distracting in their texture, as contrasted with the arms.  The lighting could be a little brighter on  her face, but that is very subjective.  Another small items is the hair on her right shoulder, with everything else so controlled this seems a bit out of place.