Ed

very nice portrait.. regards..

tarek

Nice skin tones and comfortable expression on your model! Nice portrait!

Marilyn Angelo

Very nice lighting.  I do find the catch lights in her eyes a little distrating though.

Excellent portrait , but I'm not keen on the catchlights either .

You've captured her expression very well and I really like the lighting and skin tones, too.  I agree with the others that the catchlights are a little too much, I would remove the secondary (horizontal) reflector and just use the soft-box as your catchlight.  I've browsed your portfolio and see that you frequently use large and complex catchlights, often to good effect, I just don't feel they benefit this portrait.  I also feel that if you are going to include her knee as a compositional element, it should be in focus.  I think this shot would be better without her knee... While it does serve to hint at the model's casual pose, the blue competes for the viewer's attention.