YO!

This is a great composition. The guy in the foreground looks like he's about to say something. Maybe he's going to complain about having his picture taken or maybe he's just going to bum a smoke. The second figure is too dark, I think, but I like the way the background is all white; it would be distracting otherwise. It would also be nice if the shot was better focussed. The main subject also has what looks like a chunk taken out of the top of hsi head, which is always a problem with bald people that I'm no good at fixing.

Anyway, good job. It's very engaging (which is why I've bothered to comment on it).