single photos VD4V3585 - 2009-11-13 à 13-47-24 - 2009-11-13 à 13-47-24 - 2009-11-13 à 13-47-24 - Version 2 -...

Nice B&W work. Lovely model. Her left eye is slightly out of focus, but it's not really disturbing if you consider the general mood of the shot. Interesting expression and pose. A honnest portrait! Regards, Alain

I like the relaxed feel, and how all the choices you made add up to that feeling. I like the framing that is tight around her head but has space on the left side, making this more relaxed. And how her shirt goes to black on the left side, keeping the eye on her face. I think her right arm is more important in the composition than it first looks-- if you were to crop this photo square and lose the arm I think the composition wouldn't work as well.

I agree with the other comment that perfection would be both eyes in focus, but perfection can be over rated.