GM truck

In front of Mac's Garden near the harbor in Key West.

I love pictures of old mechanical objects falling into disrepair. This would have been a fine shot but as it is the additional, over the top processing you've applied draws ones attention away from the subject matter. Maybe it would work better if the vehicle was isolated from the background and didn't have a lamp post coming out of the hood.

 

This picture definitely has great prospects but is just a little too cluttered for me!

Simon, couldn't agree with you more. Exactly my conclusion about this image. If you check my portfolio you'll see the original in color with just a bit of post processing. When you experiment sometimes you find a gem, but mostly you don't. But either way you learn something useful. Regards, Bill