riclan 0 Posted March 23, 2010 Very nice. The backlight doesn't bother me since we see her beautiful eyes so clearly. Link to comment
aeg 0 Posted March 23, 2010 Very nice high key image. Love the pose and lighting and detail. Regards Link to comment
AlainD 0 Posted March 23, 2010 Fantastic high-key work ! Amazing model. I would just get rid of the metallic thing in the top right corner which slightly draws my attention off the model's magnetic eyes. Regards, Alain Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted March 24, 2010 Oleg, She is a beautiful girl. You have focused well on her eyes. I love her smile. Her skin tone is very good. She has applied her make-up well. The soft high-key lighting works very well with this girl. Her blonde hair fits into the tones very well. Her eyes are so well lit that it doesn't bother me that there are no clearly defined catch lights. Your left and right compositional balance is very good. I would crop some off the bottom to better compositionally balance the top and bottom -- at least half way up to her elbow. Too bad she isn't further away from background so that it could go way out of focus and better draw attention to the girl. If you would have her lower her left elbow and position it closer to her body, it would not be so out of focus. It would also lesson any foreshortening that is occurring by having it closer to the camera than her body. It bothers me a little bit that the underside of her nose is lit more that the top of her nose. It looks like light is coming from below her. Nice shot, Mark Link to comment
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