barry_sharpnack1 0 Posted February 18, 2003 Great color and composition, I like the use of expansive sky here, and it must have been a great day for sky. The only thing I'd like to see is brighter color in the yellow. It may have been dingy, but a brighter more vibrant yellow would contrast so much better against the sky. I really like how old stucco buildings photograph. Link to comment
kiko1 0 Posted February 19, 2003 Barry, thanks for your suggestion. You are right, I'll change brightness of the yellow. Link to comment
kris_bennett 0 Posted February 19, 2003 Nice job! The only thing I would like to see would be a -little- bit more of the building and a -little- less sky. I agree on the yellow being a little dim too, but it sounds like you're working on that. It takes a moment to notice, but the bell really begins to stand out. I think this would look great on paper. Something for your living room, maybe? Nice job. You should be proud. :) Link to comment
dougs 0 Posted February 19, 2003 with the white border against the white clouds, it loses definition, if the clouds were higher, the white trim against the blue sky would have been my choice...IMHO doug Link to comment
pavel1 0 Posted February 26, 2003 In a shot like this where color is so much of it I think that the contrast is not hight enough. The colors come across too flat and the white of the building should be ballanced to white. Link to comment
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