Mount Saint Michel - Door

Thank you for your comments. Tom

Magnificant and rustic looking door with great tones.

This is a nice study in shades of brown. It has a very pleasing unity.

I like the colortones and the light source through the door.The dark wall on the right doesn't add a lot to the shot. Maybe a slightly different angle or framing would have created more interest. There are aspects of the shot I like but overall it isn't moving me. Sorry. Maybe a shift to the left so we see more of the window and bench would help.

Thanks for your recent commets. You keep mentioning the line drawing tool in PE-7 but I am not sure what you are referring to.Maybe you could give me a little more info. - Charles

i agree that the dark wall on the right is a bit heavy-handed but on the whole the experiential impact - the sense of inner and outer space - and all the lived significances of the threshold are well convey. The quality of light figures strongly in conveying the mythical ot story-telling power of the scene. the dark wall is important in conveying the sense of being inside looking out but again is just a little heavy in balance with the rest of the elements.

another great shot....there could be some improvements I'm sure...as I am struggleing myslef in these areas...a lot has to do with 'shadows' and digital color noise'..........but I'm sure we'll get the hang of it. On the whole Tom, I think it is a great shot....great POV.....you are doing very well these days...sincerely, Gail

I like much this work. Lines, shadows and light in a good tone of color. Thanks so much for your words, always. Best Regards dear Tom.

Tom, this one might just be your best yet. You and arches seem to have an affinity for one another.

 

--Lannie

This is absolutely haunting and perfectly realized. It speaks of the beauty of light, architecture, artistic composition and (sigh!) France...