Rough draft

A few obvious neccesary corrections-

Remove tag;

Right end of bracelet is out of focus.

Please add your comments

I agree with Frank about the tongue being behind the buckle. That way the fact that it's out of focus won't detract from the picture.

You have to get rid of the price tag - too tacky.

Your white balance is off, the white b/g looks very blue and the light across the b/g isn't even.

Good luck

<Chas>