Rough draft

Better than the other one that I commented on.

When you're working on plex like this you have another set of reflections and highlights to worry about. Here you have a very hot spot at the bottom of the frame that's brighter than the rest of the watch. Same with the reflections from the links at the back. The back light is a good idea to give definition and separation from the b/g, but it's too bright such that the highlight there is brighter than the face.

Keep practicing, you'll learn what works and how to repeat it.

<Chas>