Broken Shoelace

This is a self portrait taken while I was the primary Caregiver for my

father who was suffering from Alzheimer's.

Thank you for your comments.

I really like your framing and the texture of the skin, but the blurred nose is a distraction that keeps pulling me away from the eyes--you need more D.O.F. to get the nose in-focus. Also, usually one catchlight in the eye is preferable to having many. That could be fixed pre- or post-shot.