model, fashion In the City

I am new in this field and would like to get better images in the future.

Please critique.

Thank you

The Composition is good, the trees are a bit blurry so either a faster shutter speed or a deeper

f stop would have fixed that. I'm really distracted by the dark - burn? in the sky.... It doesn't belong in this photo, or needs to be more evenly distributed. What was your intention or goal in doing this?

yes the blurry on the tree because i was put the aperture on 2.8.

the dark on the sky coz i was trying to reduce the highlight as it look too bright before.

and i was trying to manipulated it into hdr image.

my goal is to improve my skill on photographing "people".