sean de merchant httpw 0 Posted February 11, 2003 A contagious smile. The composition is not very stimulating. She is dead center in the frame, her boots are cut off at the ankle, yet there is damaged/dirty (white line) negative space at the top. Why did you hide here feet? She is dead center, yet she visually ignores the viewer. I find with her body language pointing left that I feel it might balance the composition to have significantly more negative space on that side of the shot. This creates a more dynamic image where I can look that way in the image and share the experience better. some thoughts, Sean Link to comment
francois cote 0 Posted February 13, 2003 good subject and good timing. i like the pose. a better framing and composition would make this photo a great great one Link to comment
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