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please critique or comment any CC much appreciated

Fantastic. No two words about it. fantastic.

excellent , belongs in a magazine

Young-Sun Teh,

 

Nice pose. Very good lighting. Good hair position. Good sharpness. Everything looks very nice, except...

 

You want to compositionally balance the left and right sides of the photograph. Your subject should have more room in front of her than behind. This allows her to be facing into the picture, not out of it. You need to crop some off the right side or include more in front of her.

 

Too bad you can't see her face!

 

Your advertising is not part of the photograph. You could put your name on the mat, but you should put your web address on the back of the photograph.

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark

thanks all for the comments and critique especially mark. really appreciate you taking the time to analyse what could be mad better will take your advice and make sure i don't repeat it again