Italy

Thx Mauro

I think these people are selling lottery tickets.

 

The aspects that I liked best about this photo were the signs and the different points of attention the people have, by their eye positions.

 

If you do another version of this photo, I would recommend cropping the top, and holding the bottom margin. There is a section of garland over the woman's head which acts as a curve; this garland has an ornament on it; this curve and ornament help to lead our eye in to her face; so do the sets of rectangles that frame her, like the window and storefront shapes.

Has potential. The fellow with the restaurant style hat has motion blur and really adds little from where I sit, so maybe crop him out and tighten up. And consider zooming more in to the lottery woman's space and her place and signs and all. Also try a bit more contrast to make the signs blacker even... Experiment and I think you wlll achieve what you were after and more. A nice street shot with lots of atmosphere in the kiosk. worth fooling with for sure.. Good luck, Mauro. gs