Minimalistic... In Korean Style

Hello photographers!I'm learning photography all by myself. So I need your critique on my photos. How does this work? Is the framing ok? The photo itself? May be my name on the photo really doesn't work? Plz, I don't care about the points, let me know what you think!!!

Thank you!

I think the photo works - it's perhaps a shade too symmetrical for me but then that's somewhat subjective. The nibbled borders look a bit heavy and distracting though. I assume you're after a "sheet of paper" effect, but compared with the delicate image I think the eventual black surround is too dominant. The name is fine as it's in a subdued colour and not intrusive, at least to my eye.