the land Ice Rink

This is still lovely, and the stars might even be better, but, for what its worth, I prefer the comp you posted to NPN. It has a lovely receding line in the foreground that helps draw me into the scene. This thrusts me up into the sky more quickly and diminishes the role the foreground plays in the whole composition. As much as that sounds like it would be a good thing here, it isn't. I simply am less engaged by this version overall and turn away from it more quickly.

For some reason I also prefer the halo more centred within the frame, but, that is liable to be a matter entirely of personal preference.