Still Life - Red

This is shot has some compositional problems created by the space between the pepper and the apples. It comes across to me, as if there are two separate arrangements shot in one frame. If there were some overlap of the apples and the pepper, I think you might find a more workable composition.

The lighting is a bit bright but not really objectionable, however, you might consider going for a bit darker shadow areas. It would help create a greater sense of shape and tone to the fruit. Also pay attention to the light on the BG. Darker would really keep the viewer's eyes concentrated on the arrangement.

I think you've got a good idea that will work with some experimentation. Use a variety of arrangements looking toward a more cohesive image. Try to minimize the blemishes on each piece or go to the grocery store and pick the best pieces you can find.

Thanks for the in-depth review. While I agree with the compo and lighting problems, I don't think I will pick perfect specimen of fruits for presentation. In real life, you do get some vege that is less than desirable. In fact I can clone out all the blemishes but I didn't, Regards

- Johnson