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Hi John,

I like the idea here very much. It's a bit of a throwback to Robert Frank's 'The Americans'. Frank covered many faces with the US flag, just like what you have done here. (Have a search on the webby if you haven't seen Frank's work).

I think there are a couple of things you could do to make this even better. I would try to reduce the noise a little bit. I think that would help. However, I think the key improvement would be putting this shot into black and white. Your composition is key here and I think that the colours are almost irrelevant.

I hope this is useful for you!

 

All the very best,

 

Rob

João, gosto da composição a la Robert Frank, e sem dúvida a expressão do personagem principal é o destaque da imagem. Os ruídos Não atarpalham ao contrário, fazem parte do contexto onde a poluição visual é a marca registrada do país. Parabéns. MF.