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Gary, I like the concept but the negative space is a bit too large for me. Perhaps a crop from the left would balance it better?

Simple but BEAUTIFUL!

Simple & Beautiful...

I think the large amount of negative space may be necessary to express the subtitle of "stillness." What can be more still than empty space? If this negative space is reduced, the photo gradually becomes an expression of "marsh grass" and its graceful yet chaotic form, perhaps not the best representation of "stillness." There's a line there somewhere, and where it's currently drawn works for me.

I understand both opinions. perhaps just a little more of the reeds on the right to balance the empty space a wee bit ...? I'm not sure. But I Iike it anyway. Regards Adrienne

nice and simple

Love it.... with all the space.... it adds to the tranquility of the mood... ;-)

There is beauty in simplicity. Flawless capture. We need more like this.